Hi buddies,
My name is Richard, I´m 43 years old, my wife's name is Claudia and we´ve 02 daughters, Antonia (10) and Emilia (4).
I am an electronic engineer but my current position is IT Security Representative in British American Tobacco Chile.
I live in Santiago, I love the outdoors, the trekking and cycling. When I can, go out with my family somewhere in the countryside to enjoy nature.
I love and need to learn English to be more competitive in my work, which is good for me and my family. I hope to learn much and to share with strangers in a more natural than today.
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Ricardo :
You worked wonderfully well.However it would be good to improve some details ."I love outdoorsy activities,trekking and cycling" sound better."When possible I go out with my family...". In your final sentence you missed a noun.(.....strangers in a more natural way than today").
Your teacher.
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