This weekend was very good and funny.The last Saturday, we were together Toeic students in the immersions activity.
That day, was very entertaining and interesting, because we had time for share, laughing and learning about the winemaking and the history of the Vine Cousiño Macul and Vine Concha y Toro.
The winemaking process the both Vines is similar in the general. The difference is in the detail by the temperature, the process time and the stored in the barrels.
In the particular, I like more the Vine Concha y Toro, the big park and the patronal house was beautiful. I learned the reasons because the Central Valley is very good for the raw material (the grape).
My day went with the meet together my friend. Good end of the day.
Yesterday, I went together my friends at the Salon del Automobile in the Espacio Riesco. Was entertaining, but exhausting. I could see many car amazing and expensive. Was a dreams!.
In facts, the weekend was very nice.
But, today in the morning, when I was my job, the subway Los Heroes was awful, because had many people waiting for a wagon. People pushed and did not care at all the person to next. Is very frustrating see the people angry, when the day started recent. Only is need a little patience, awareness by the other and a happy face, to make the trip more enjoyable.
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Arlett:
How good to see you again !Wow! You wrote a good paragraph.That means we are on the right track.Now correcting your small mistakes ,you should have written."...all TOEIC students in the immersion activity","..we had enough time to share ,laugh and learn ...","...of Cousiño-Macul and Concha y Toro Wineyards","and the time stored in the barrels","As far as I'm concerned I liked most the Concha y Toro vineyard ,the extensive park and patronal house were so beautiful","My day continued when I got together with my friend..","Yesterday,I went with some of my friends to the Car Showroom at Espacio Riesco","It was entertaining but also exhausting","I could watch many amazing cars ,but they were so costly, Gosh! They were only dreams.!","In fact this last weekend was very nice","but this morning on my way to my job the subway service at Los Heroes was awful.There were many people waiting anxiously for the trains to come...","....and didn't care at all for the people who were next to them","It's so frustrating to see angry people when the day has just started" and "we only need...".
Hopefully ,you have a good week and the events that took place this morning at Los Heroes never,but never repeat again.
Your teacher.
This weekend was very good and funny.
The last Saturday, we were all TOEIC students in the immersion activity.
That day, was very entertaining and interesting, because we had enough time to share, laugh and learn about the winemaking and the history of Cousiño Macul and Concha y Toro Wineyards.
The winemaking process the both Vines is similar in the general. The difference is in the detail by the temperature, the process time and the time stored in the barrels.
As far as I'm concerned I like most the Concha y Toro vineyard, the extensive park and the patronal house were so beautiful. I learned the reasons because the Central Valley is very good for the raw material (the grape).
My day continued when I got together my friends. Good end of the day.
Yesterday, I went with some of my friends to the Car showroom at Espacio Riesco. It was entertaining, but also exhausting. I could watch many amazing cars, but they were so costly, Gosh! They were only dreams!.
In fact, this last weekend was very nice.
But, this morning on my way to my job the subway service al Los Heroes was awful. There were many people waiting anxiously for the trains to come. People pushed and didn't care at all for the people who were next to them. It's so frustrating to see angry people, when the day has just started. We only need a little patience, awareness by the other and a happy face, to make the trip more enjoyable.
thanks teacher for your comments
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