There are many things I could put on this list, but these are some of the most important..
..Things that I like
I love outdoor activities, the mountains, lakes, snowed capped mountain peaks, endles ocean wavwes, the win, the fresh water, to doing trekking, cycling or just being in a tent seeing the sky...the beautiful nature. I love to te cinema. All this of course with my family.
and.. Things that I dont like
I don't like the noise, the strong trash music, i don't like the polution, the people angry and unpolite, I don't like the life cost, this is to much expensive and is difficult having a simple life.
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Ricardo :
Your title should read ."Things I like and dislike".Now analyzing your message,it would be better if you wrote."I love outdoorsy activities,snowed capped mountain peaks,endless ocean waves,the unbearable sound of the winds and the fresh and revitalizing water.On the other hand,I love trekking,cycling or just being in a tent watching the deep blue sky.In a few words I amaze before the beautiful and gripping nature."
In the second part it would be more descriptive if you wrote something like " I dislike noise,metallic music,pollution, and angry people". Likewise I hate the life cost (Money is so hard to get).Everything is so costly. That detail makes difficult to have an ordinary life."
Your teacher.
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